My front cover is ok i think but could be better. i like the title and the font becuase i think it stands out. i also like the colour of the title becuase it adds to the boldness of it. The picture is good becuase it fits the whole page and lets you know its about the students and for the students. i dont like the way ive put the different extracts of text in because i think they look really out of place but i couldnt find anywhere better to put them.
Feedback:
jake:like the person in it. the title and the font and the colour. neutral picture. little text boxes
Dan: likes the pciture becuase he feels like jake is engaging with him becuase of the eye contact. likes the name of the magazine and the colour blue becuase it stands out and its the same colour as the college logo.

the contents page is very simple but its clear whats on what page so the reader will not have to be lookign for ages to find what there looking for. the heading is very clear at the top so its obvious what the page is about. i think the page is to basic and may look at bit boring. there is no colour so if i didnt a second draft i would defiantly add more colour. there would be a picture at the bottom of a group of students which i think adds a much needed bit of colour to the page and makes it look more interesting.the page numbers are clear and away from the other text so it is easy to see whats on what page.